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The scenes repeated in his head, your smiling face, the cute laugh that sounded like music to his ears, and the wonderful times you two shared together. All of it was too much for him to handle. Tears trickled out of his emerald eyes onto his cheeks as he fell to his knees clutching the white cloth placed out on the church floor. "(Name) …… (Name)…… (NAME)!!!!!!!!!"
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You looked at the brown leather journal that you were given when you entered his kingdom. You took a napkin to dry off your tear-stained cheeks but it really didn't help since they kept coming."(N-Name)?" You turned around as a little smile crept onto your face, at lease being in heaven lets you see one of your very old friends. "H-How are you Prussia?" The fallen kingdom smiled and knelt down next to you. "Do you want to put this journal to good use?" You simply nodded as he opened the book "It's just blank pages Gilbert..." he chuckled as he whispered something that made your heart race. "Show me Antonio Fernandez Carriedo"

With that your boyfriend appeared sleeping by your White coffin. You could also see Lovino and Feliciano in their priest uniforms placing what looks like a crimson rose bouquet on your coffin. "A-ANTONIO!!!!"  You shrieked catching the attention of some angels passing by. "(Name) stop he can't hear you" The albino patted your back as tears started forming in your eyes." Hold on!!!" His eyes darted to the journal and started mumbling some words. Your body started glowing "G-Gil?!?!" "(Name) don't worry." With that you suddenly fell onto a cold marble floor. You knew it would hurt but you felt nothing.
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Antonio opened his eyes hearing a light thud, immediately he shot up looking around "Who's there?!" The Spanish male's eyes widened to see the love of his life sitting on the floor with beautiful white wing sprouting out of her back while feathers fell around her."(N-Name)?!?!?!?!"  He sprinted over to the girl clutching her tightly without a second thought. "S-Spain?" You rubbed your eyes to make sure it wasn't an illusion. He was still in front of you. "SPAIN!!" you quickly took him into a warm embrace before the moment could end.
You heard Prussia voice in your head whispering (Name) hurry up you are going to soon disappear and come back up so hurry You could already see your hand starting to fade away. "Antonio listen quick" His eyes darted straight into yours "Y-Yes?" "I can't stay for long but I want you to know one thing" "Yes! Tell me now!" Tears already started pouring down his cheeks as your body started to fade way, but you gave him a happy smile "I want you to be happy no matter what okay, I love you never forget that now please smile for me" He gave you a sorrowful smile as you faded away.


      I Love you never forget that now please smile for me
I got lazy at the end ;w; Well comment,fav, whatever

Hetalia(c) Hima-papa

You(c) Your mama

The picture(c) it's owner ( IT WAS SO PERFECT FOR THE LAST SCENE SOWWY!!)

Story(c) me!
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Nyoalice Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2014
I lost my life... BUT SPAIN CAN TO LIVE NAOW. I DON'T REGRET ANYTHING.
Yeah, never forget and smile for me :'3
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RandomGurlonthenet Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Don't cry Don't CRY

*suddenly plays Goodnight,Sweet Ladies*

OH SHIT

:iconspidermanfeelsplz:
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TiffanyTheDarkCat Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I cried of the sadness that he misses me...
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
OMIGAWD


















I had angel wings~!










and Toni was upset about my death!





WAIT - I died?!!?!? When. Who. Wut. HUH?!
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Student Artist
PFTTTTTTT- MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012
HAHAAHAHHAAHAH
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mia1444 Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2011  Hobbyist
oh. my. god.




I HAD WINGS~! XD
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:iconaznotaku123:
Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2011  Student Artist
XD

OHHH YESSS!!!~
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Dragongirl1501 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011
NUUU, ANTONIO!!! I'M DEAD!!! :nuu:
At least My bffl Gil is there, though. :3
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:iconaznotaku123:
Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2011  Student Artist
XD
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time-is-toxic Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
That was really sad D: :heart: It was awesome, though! I loved it.
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks so much!
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XDarkEssenceX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Reminds me of Tsubasa, man that was sad XD At least Gilbert's in heaven so I won't be alone XD
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Artist
Now that i think about it, it does seem like Tsubasa... well we always have Gil!
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XDarkEssenceX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Funny Antonio could actually play Saroyan XD he's got the hair for it and his personality as well XD wierd O.o
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Artist
HOLY ROMAN EMPIRE Your right!!!! Wait does that mean he needs to get our feathers back? XD
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XDarkEssenceX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
Maybe that is an act of true love XD
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Artist
This is how it goes!


Spain: Guys I found the feather! OOOOO A TOMATO *runs off to they tomato*
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XDarkEssenceX Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student General Artist
:noes:.... idiot that was ur one and only chance... oh well guess you won't mind if Gilbert and I become more than just friends XD
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2011  Student Artist
XD its like
Spain: Hey where did the feather go? *nomming on tomato*
Gilbert: GOT HER NOW SUCKER! *arm around your shoulder*
Spain: FUUUUUUU- CURSE YOU TOMATOES!!! yummy delicious tomatoes....
You: He really picked a tomato over me? *facepalm*
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HeReIaMRaMbLiNgAgAin Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Digital Artist
im crying. great. hope your happy. CUZ IM NOT. this really was beautiful
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks so much! AND I QUIET AM XD
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xXKatMitzugage97Xx Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Awwww! I love it, i almost cried...
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
Thank you so much! and sorry..^^'
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xXKatMitzugage97Xx Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
your welcome! its okay, i would love it if you made more, its really good :)
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
Really? I'll probably post another one tonight
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xXKatMitzugage97Xx Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
really? ^^ when you post it i'll read it! :)
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ninjagirlninjagirl Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
....*faints*......
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:iconaznotaku123:
Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
NUUUUUUU *brings back to life*
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BlackButlerFan Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
So CUTE
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:iconaznotaku123:
Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks you so much!!!!!!!!!!!!
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BlackButlerFan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
:D
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Matutolypea Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Writer
Aww!!! SO CUTE!!! >.< But didn't you know... PRUSSIA'S OFFICIALLY A COUNTRY AGAIN!!! Well, just a Mirco-nation, but still a country :I
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goldenheartedgirl Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Photographer
long live Ore-Sama~
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Matutolypea Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Writer
AGREED!!! XDD :iconsexyprussia2plz::heart:
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:iconaznotaku123:
Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks so much!!!! Well I wrote this before i knew so ehhehe ^^'
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Matutolypea Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Writer
XDD Fair play~
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FinnahShella Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
SO SAD.
I'M CRYING RAINBOWS. ;w;
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:iconaznotaku123:
Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
IMMA SORRY PLEASE DOTA SHOOT ME!!! *runs ( like a boss pffft NO LIKE AN ITALIAN)
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FinnahShella Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
LIEK A PRUSSIAN!
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
THAT WILL END UP TRIPPING ON A ROCK
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electricswing Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011
Im always thinking about fallen angels TwT uwaaaha so cute.
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
Really? Thanks so much!
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Bynsair Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student General Artist
D': so many sad Spainxreader storries lately *sniff* Im gonna get depressed seeing Spain so sad!

Anyway I thought it was really sweet ^ ^
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks so much *hands you tissue*
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Bynsair Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student General Artist
np *takes tissue and blows nose* (I actually have a small cold at the moment so its kind of funny that you gave me a tissue XD)
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student Artist
(Really? I hope you get better!)
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:iconbynsair:
Bynsair Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Student General Artist
(thanks! I hope I do too)
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violentluck Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Writer
I seriously went into tears. The picture is perfect for the story, i so agree. :happycry: :clap:
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Aznotaku123 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2011  Student Artist
*Hands you tissue* Thanks! And It took me so long to find hat pic XD
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